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PostSubject: Review my conglomerate faction backstory    Wed Dec 30, 2015 8:35 am

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Tl;Dr basically Screaming Skulls is the remaining members of Resting Mountain the scariest recon/sniper/assassin squad in conglomerate army

Also Takashi is reminiscing at the end when it's counting
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PostSubject: Re: Review my conglomerate faction backstory    Wed Dec 30, 2015 11:37 am

Cool.

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PostSubject: Re: Review my conglomerate faction backstory    Wed Dec 30, 2015 12:30 pm

Really does not tickle my fancy. Perhaps putting more work into it, and expanding on this Conglomerates lore? Also, why do they have all Japanese anime names? They are alien who use mixture of multiple languages like Japanese, Russian, and some other shit. But not that does not mean they are traditionally Japanese, as they are even stationed in Africa! And if they had names, they would probably be undecipherable alien gibberish and would probably sound like this- TAKEMONIAWVAKELMADORE or some shit.

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PostSubject: Re: Review my conglomerate faction backstory    Wed Dec 30, 2015 3:18 pm

Wat

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PostSubject: Re: Review my conglomerate faction backstory    Wed Dec 30, 2015 3:59 pm

From what I think I would say Grey should be a singular experimental weapon. A supersoldier machine....or some sort :I

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PostSubject: Re: Review my conglomerate faction backstory    Wed Dec 30, 2015 4:25 pm

Grey is not conglo -_-

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PostSubject: Re: Review my conglomerate faction backstory    Wed Dec 30, 2015 4:33 pm

TheVokak wrote:
Really does not tickle my fancy. Perhaps putting more work into it, and expanding on this Conglomerates lore? Also, why do they have all Japanese anime names? They are alien who use mixture of multiple languages like Japanese, Russian, and some other shit. But not that does not mean they are traditionally Japanese, as they are even stationed in Africa! And if they had names, they would probably be undecipherable alien gibberish and would probably sound like this- TAKEMONIAWVAKELMADORE or some shit.
True but, this was just an opening to my faction but. I can make a whole story around Resting Mountain and screaming skulls
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PostSubject: Re: Review my conglomerate faction backstory    Wed Dec 30, 2015 4:48 pm

pretty gay tbh
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PostSubject: Re: Review my conglomerate faction backstory    Wed Dec 30, 2015 5:02 pm

Coront wrote:
pretty gay tbh
Explain how 2 fix plz
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PostSubject: Re: Review my conglomerate faction backstory    Wed Dec 30, 2015 6:53 pm

TheVokak wrote:
Really does not tickle my fancy. Perhaps putting more work into it, and expanding on this Conglomerates lore? Also, why do they have all Japanese anime names? They are alien who use mixture of multiple languages like Japanese, Russian, and some other shit. But not that does not mean they are traditionally Japanese, as they are even stationed in Africa! And if they had names, they would probably be undecipherable alien gibberish and would probably sound like this- TAKEMONIAWVAKELMADORE or some shit.
They aren't aliens tho.. Chinese
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PostSubject: Re: Review my conglomerate faction backstory    Wed Dec 30, 2015 8:26 pm

Yummy wrote:
TheVokak wrote:
Really does not tickle my fancy. Perhaps putting more work into it, and expanding on this Conglomerates lore? Also, why do they have all Japanese anime names? They are alien who use mixture of multiple languages like Japanese, Russian, and some other shit. But not that does not mean they are traditionally Japanese, as they are even stationed in Africa! And if they had names, they would probably be undecipherable alien gibberish and would probably sound like this- TAKEMONIAWVAKELMADORE or some shit.
They aren't aliens tho.. Chinese
I've forgotten they've been turned into Chinese infantry. I'm still used to the old lore, sorry about that.

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PostSubject: Re: Review my conglomerate faction backstory    Wed Dec 30, 2015 9:28 pm

TheVokak wrote:
Yummy wrote:
TheVokak wrote:
Really does not tickle my fancy. Perhaps putting more work into it, and expanding on this Conglomerates lore? Also, why do they have all Japanese anime names? They are alien who use mixture of multiple languages like Japanese, Russian, and some other shit. But not that does not mean they are traditionally Japanese, as they are even stationed in Africa! And if they had names, they would probably be undecipherable alien gibberish and would probably sound like this- TAKEMONIAWVAKELMADORE or some shit.
They aren't aliens tho.. Chinese
I've forgotten they've been turned into Chinese infantry. I'm still used to the old lore, sorry about that.
I feel you lol POOPNOOK reunite
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